Descriptive writing

I wake up this morning to a porcelain cup on a brown stranded surface
Smells of delicious goodness wafting in the air
A smile comes to my face once I see the golden milky swirling liquid inside
I take a sip of this sweet liquid and purr in my seat.

So, what do you think?
Did you understand or is there any mistakes?
Comment below please

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By HPS Keira Ocean

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